I've already lost this one. See, I made a deal with myself this morning that I'd get through this without crying, and I want you all to know I have honored that deal right up until about eleven seconds ago. So bear with me.
When Lily was small, we had a nightlight shaped like a little crescent moon. It glowed this soft amber, and every night after we'd finished whatever story she'd chosen, usually the one about the runaway rabbit, she'd say, "Leave the moon on, Daddy." And I would. For years. Long past the age when the other kids had given theirs up, Lily kept her moon. She said the dark was fine, she just liked knowing something was watching over her while she slept.
I used to worry about that. I thought a girl who needs a light on will be afraid of the world. I had it exactly backwards. What I was actually raising was someone who understood, better than I did, that you don't have to be fearless. You just have to keep a little light burning and go to sleep anyway.
And then Noah came along. Noah, you are the calmest man I've ever met, and I have watched you these last few years become the thing that lets my daughter rest easy. You are her amber glow now. I couldn't have chosen better if I'd spent a lifetime looking, and believe me, I was prepared to.
Lily, you don't need me to leave the moon on anymore. You've got someone to face the dark with. That's all a father ever really wants.
So here's to Lily and Noah. May you always finish the story together, and may there always be a little light left on in your home for each other. To the two of you.
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